A song, open and expressive with a real sense of place and of expansive emotion, sung with great energy and belief. Cool and clear.
HmmA tumbling country ballad, maybe.
Such pathos Wow ibeati
Indomitable hope. I like it. Or maybe I'm just projecting again. :)
Is this a song? Do you put them to music?I saw your profile. Fight Club is one of my favorite films. I watch it often. The book was a strange read, but just amazing.
Love is like that. Yes it is.Brian
Like the sense of togetherness with this one.
The light is a great motif. Have you heard the song Indifference by Pearl Jam? This poem makes me think of it--Ben Harper does a cover of it that kicks tail!I see you've met my new friend, Lance. He's cool. He puts the Christ back in Christianity--a good soul.
first of all I love that title, and I love that picture..and the poem, as usual, Eric is just so damned beautiful.. its lovely!! I will wait for one, as sweetly worded as yours are..:)
Hello my friend, I see you are doing well and still writing up a storm.Thanks for always encouraging me to still write.
Oh, I love this one! Thank you..
Have you published a collection of your poems? If not, why not.
Walksfarwoman blog deleted ..where has she and her relective soul gone ??any word?
Hope shines through :).(I love the title)
Maybe we can exchange links. Let me firstname.lastname@example.org
I'm with princess....I love the title....keep it burning.....
Yep.I once carried a torch for somebody for 20 years.This is very hard on the vinyl on Greyhound buses.
i have such a sense of hope after reading this.
Not sleeping? I can sing you a lullaby, if you'd like to go on not sleeping.The poem evokes something I've always longed for: home.
I like the imagery of scratching love letters under a grinning moon. Lovely!
Beautiful my brother,Sending you peace and love, M
Paul SThank you, you put a good spin on this. And I like the idea of a song from it. I wasn't thinking that, but I try to make the lines have perfect rhythm, so I guess it could be adapted.Ultra ToastIt could be. Or a Robert Johnson-esque blues.I sold my soul for poetic justice, and all I got was this silly blog!
SandyThank you! Your observations are awesome. And I try to have pathos in my writing. I think it works, don't you?LisaYou may be projecting, but it's a good projection.Take care, you!Peace out.
BethI don't put them to music, but I get told all the time that that would work.And I love Fight Club. Oddly enough, I never read the book. But one day, I will.BrianLove will wait. Not always patiently, but it will be there wit a fire lit for it's counterpart.Peace you all.
Karma LennonThank you. It's one waiting for the second, and what will happen? They become one! In a fun way, I'm sure...EnemyLance is a cool guy. His blog is filled with good thoughts on the subject of faith.I love the light/dark motif. I use it a little too much, but hey, I get by.Thanks, you two. Peace.
RoseWrite as much as you can. I had to get years worth of bad writing out of the way before I could do this.Thank you for your compliments.BarbAwesome to see you. I hoped you were well. Lets all get some stuff going at the poet's corner!
BlancoNo, thank you, my friend.I insist!Leigh I haven't sent out in a long time. Too long! I get a lot of people saying the same thing. I need to do it soon...
SandyI'm not sure where she has gone. I hope she returns. Her words were a real trip.PrincessYes, it does indeed. And it will.Thank you. The title loves you, too!=D
LanceI actually have you linked, if it's all good...Peace out.SingletonThe fire will always be lit!And if you're with Princess, then you too are loved by my title.peace and love, my friend.
IvanNow you're singing the blues!God bless greyhound. Makes for a convenient ride in and a likewise getaway.MarissaYou give me a sense of hope. Thank you for reading here.
X DellHome is were the hearth is. It can also be where the hat hangs, the fridge hums and the band plays.No need for a lullaby. Plenty of cappuccino here.BemusedBe by soon, my friend.The moon is the best night light around. Along with the fire, there is no end of romance.MaithriYou are love and light. You spread it everywhere!
Mary Stebbins TaittThank you for the visit! Glad you liked it.
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