
the window's still open
late November night
listening for the most
sublime of all words
ever to let breathe
or be given breath to
lying in anticipation
under breath in the attic
and when that word is given
all will be golden--
one more burnished sunset
on San Marina lagoon,
one more coin for the voice
at the end of the line
so just give the word
but listen for the echo,
an arc royale choir
with the breath of stars
just one more syllable
for this wordless poet
one last word
and I'll listen quietly
as the breeze slinks in late
with cold November
through the open window
listening
for one more echo
in the night
31 charges of vandalism dropped:
I almost feel a cool breeze rustling through the blinds as I read this. And what a lovely picture to go along with it.
Oh, and regarding your question? I actually just had my last class EVER today! Unfortunately, I still have a ton of other responsibilities keeping me around (dissertation, practicums, etc), but I should be off campus and at my internship in a year and a half. It's a long haul!!
Thank you Princess!
I've posted a lot of pictures of the moon, but that one was the clearest images of it I had ever seen.
That and it was hard to find a good image to go with this poem--to me, the moon always works!
And uber-congratulations on the progress toward finishing your PhD! Just remember to keep the fees reasonable, OK?
You definitely evoke a good sense of cold and frost here.
Now you're cooking.
Funny that Charles' blog should be RAZORED ZEN
But not just zen here, but a fine poem.
Ewwwwwwww, c-c-c-cold!
A good poem, nonetheless. BTW, did you mean "plaintive?" A plaintiff's the person bringing an action against a defendant in court...
beautiful luna, beautiful poem
listening is key isn't it
for all poets.
open the window, your heart, your mind, your arms
listen and respond.
clearly..
you have this gift.
love, ~s.
Where have I been during these past creations?! You've been busy!
Are you familiar with Leonard Cohen, Eric? "Plaintive Sigh" has a similar style to his. Emotional,
sensitive, and patient. Lovely!
Thank you for your comment, Eric.
I do dream quite a bit. :))
Eric, you've gone all melancholic on us...
You seem like a man clinging on to something.
Let go. Be free.
Wow, very busy with your posts!
Jdilla needs to talk to you, he misses ya, bro.
50161777714072898
pull my old phone number out of the string
Why is it that we listen best when there's no one around, when the night is still?
"as the breeze slinks in late
with cold November
through the open window"
I love cold silent air. Nothing beats listening to it with a nice cold drink.
oh my title is exquisite- what a match !!
wow, that was wonderfully gloomey eric.
"listening
for one more echo
in the night"
sometimes u just feel like surrendering to the darkness...
hey there...
haven't been here in awhile. good to see you still writing into the wee hours. great stuff.
Lovely
T
Jdilla wants to pay you to write for him. call him, seriously.
I'm getting an echo of 'one more' here... One more time, maybe?
nice haunting feel to this one.
but wordless poet? who dat?
sigh....
Cool! Hope you aren't frozen!
Brrr, I feel the coolness, and I listent o the sound of the hand of one hand clapping..yes, silence, picturing the stars, I love this piece :)
That is really good.
Charles
Thanks for the encouragement, as always. I was freezing that night, for sure.
Ivan
You go too far!
But I indeed will take the compliment and run with it.
Lana
Fixed!
Yeah, I'm not a fan of the cold either.
She
I try! I need to cultivate the gift a bit more, I feel.
Thank you for reading here!
Petra
I am very familiar with Mr Cohen. And I thank you for that glorious comparison, even if I am not really all that much of a comparison to a master like he is.
Crushed
I know! I hold onto feelings so I can call them up like this. Sorry if it's depressing, but the cold does that to me.
Five6
Got it. Done. Thank you bro! You da man!
JR
That is quite the question.
Seems the thrum of life gets in the way of too many things. We need to get our own thoughts across, and sometimes lose what is best in another's words.
Captain Corky
You said it. make mine a triple.
I beati
Thank you! I try...
Crashy
But always return to the light. You are always welcome there from the gloom...
MerelyMe
Good to see you as well.
The nights are long, but I manage and am rarely a lonely soul.
Inside Our Hearts
Thank you! Good to see you.
Five6
Done as well. Good deal.
Clea
There's always room for one more...
Very clever!
Benjibopper
I guess I mixed my metaphor a little too strong there.
Thanks for the read!
Singleton
Yeah... that's about it!
Good to see you!
MyUtopia
I'm thawed, thankfully...
Peace out
Cazzie!!!
And this piece is very appreciative of your love for it. Silence is the truest voice of God.
Leon Basin
Thanks for the visit! Glad you dropped in.
see, you're more beautiful when you don't rhyme.
as ever.
:)
\m/
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