the river, the ocean
waves upon waves upon swells
as the wind blows life into its
heaves and lows
and not a buoy
not a raft not
driftwood
so loved
for what it is...
...found
this humble poem
contains a puddle
of ideas
murky with sentiment
~
but your ocean
is painted with poetry
and a water color monalisa
smile so familiar to me
and etched with words
on the wildest waves
words waiting for peace--
that mirror of the gods
the ocean at rest
on Sunday morning
as our feet are the only ripple
seen, laughing and spreading
like truth
like proof
of what will always be
and so still you float,
in the blue green sea
waiting for no one
because all who love you
all who you know
float there beside you
always
somewhere
beyond the sea
9 charges of vandalism dropped:
Sure it sounds familliar... so often we can't help but love that which we know well.
Good thing I'm my own publisher in these parts...
There's no better way to promote than by publishing our own words. One ripple at a time, one ripple at a time.
Jim, thanks for the words man.
So glad to hear them.
Yes, and this one was freshly written tonight, the past 2 were from class long ago. A difference can be seen and felt.
That's sad & sweet at the same time...
SOmetimes poets are like little children. We explore the new best when we begin with the familiar.
aw geez. Am I one of those "copy and pasters" people who grab them words and dtags them around the corner and tosses them down on the table and says stuff about it.
Then again, my favorite line?
so loved
for what it is...
...found
So, #1. That is a cool piece, full of ideas all by itself.
#2. That might get you published elsewhere, too.
and, #3 Yes, I guess I AM one of those C'n'P guys, but it's rare.
today,
I was floating
in a cotton balls...
melted, and murky.
I couldn't see my toes,
the water was too
deep
and
the darkest shade of white...
Clink!
To the sea...
very moving sandy
I'm bobbing on your sea of words
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