Met a man with one leg
wearing a green fedora
playing a cracked guitar
with 3 broken strings
and an open suitcase
with silvery coins thrown
in for his dinner, drinks, fix
whathaveyagotiswhathegot
and I added my few bits to
the meager pile that grew
slowly
as the wind picked up
and the sun fell from a
weak autumn apogee
and stood there listening
to a man playing the blues
who knew it for what it was
And tonight I'll get home
and eat and drink and fix
and sleep
and then do it again
and again
andagainandagianandagain
and again
andagainandagianandagain
and I will never be as free
as that one legged man
as that one legged man
sitting on his stool
playing the blues
as the gulls wheel overhead
as the gulls wheel overhead
Downtown
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Wow, this one is really good. Love the subtlety of it. and the last stanza is dynamite
Thanks Charles! That's a ringing endorsement if ever I have heard one!
Hitting your stride...No crutch.
Excellent!
Puns always welcome, with or without intent.
exceptional! poem here /and pleasure hearing from you..
always appreciate your insights
say "hi" to our mutual friends in the blogosphere..
..everyone's gotta write to be free.. (i'll be facebookin' that one..)
love, ~s.
Thanks Sandra
I'll make sure to say hello for you.
Eric,
Thanks for visiting my blog.
You give it colour, and hell, even light! :)
Hey, I love reading there. You have that Ivan-style approach that makes it fun to see what's contained in the next line.
Hopefully you can keep up the demand!
love those gulls wheeling overhead.
Another great piece. Glad to see you are back!
You really rock!
Demand, demand.
At this time I'm trying to butter up a medim-sized book publisher in New York.
God, I hate rejection.
Keep your fingers crossed for me.
oh yeah
Sweeter
Good to see you again as well! I try to rock and roll as much as possible. Glad i can convey that in words.
Ivan
Fingers crossed. But if you get it it won't be by my luck, it will be on your own merit and words.
Ibeati
you know it!
I must say I am truly heartened by those kind words, Eric.
you know what this reminded me of?? bon jovi's these days!!! and i mean that as a compliment, i was great bon jovi fan! :)
p.s: hello eric, longg time! how have you been?
Great descriptive images here - so visual. Great work, Eric.
Forgive me, but I'd imagine that the one-legged man playing his three-string guitar might rather be sleeping, and eating, under a roof, againandagainandagain:-)
Great poem.
Merry Ho-Ho, Eric.
And thanks for the Christms greeting.
long time ...I guess ..I wonder all is well with you ..are you into blogging anymore >>
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